The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild)

mas0n99
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The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 30, 2011 19:41:35 GMT -5

Post by mas0n99 on Dec 30, 2011 19:41:35 GMT -5

Guild Application Template

Guild Name:The Black Serpents
Guild Purpose:To Do Contracts and Look for Relics
Guild Type:(Mercenary,Viking):Mercenary
How does your Guild plan to make profit:We Do Contracts,Contract Accepting:Killing,Robing,Guarding,Assassinting
Guild Lore: (How it started):We Started Out With The Thieves Guild Good Pay Nothing to complicated We Had To Deal With Some Rogue Members But One Day We Were Asigned to Kill Our Parents But We Didnt Want to So We Left But The Thieves guild Did NOT Like that so they sent assassins after us and our parents....Sadly Our Parents Couldnt Fight them off and sadly were killed But We Finished off the assassins that were sent.Now We Have a Bounty on our head

Guild Rules:Rule #1:Never Disobey The Serpents Leader. Rule #2 NEVER Steal From Other Serpent Members. Rules #3 Never Murder a Inosent Civilan unless asualted by him/her.

Ranks:Kind Serpent <--Highest Rank)) , Black Warrior <--- Warrior Serpent)) , New Blood <-- new Member))

Note:I Am No Longer Jarl Of Bristolbay Labargoth is Jarl Now.

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peraldon Hero Daemune the Kneecapper ~\\|Daemune Harkentolde\|/~ Posts: 204	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 5:29:13 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by peraldon on Dec 31, 2011 5:29:13 GMT -5 More information please! I don't think Colbinile will accept it in its current form...
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The Listener Guardian Listener Posts: 109	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 6:26:47 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The Listener on Dec 31, 2011 6:26:47 GMT -5 Steal much ? xD

Torchlight Warrior Don't mess with the bunny, He has a eye patch. Posts: 97	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 6:29:37 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Torchlight on Dec 31, 2011 6:29:37 GMT -5 Isn't this basically a mix of the thieves guild and the dark brotherhood?
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The Listener Guardian Listener Posts: 109	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 6:32:52 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The Listener on Dec 31, 2011 6:32:52 GMT -5 Why dont you basically join thieves guild or dark brotherhood instead?

mas0n99 Bandit Posts: 26	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 11:17:23 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mas0n99 on Dec 31, 2011 11:17:23 GMT -5 Well I Havent seen Many mercenary Groups So I Wanna make one :L i just hope denivire accepts....

mas0n99 Bandit Posts: 26	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 11:18:25 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mas0n99 on Dec 31, 2011 11:18:25 GMT -5 More information please! I don't think Colbinile will accept it in its current form... Peraldon what should i add ?

The Listener
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The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 11:24:16 GMT -5

Post by The Listener on Dec 31, 2011 11:24:16 GMT -5

How does your Guild plan to make profit:We Do Contracts,Contract Accepting:Killing,Robing,Guarding,Assassinting

Killing , Assassinating is dark brotherhoods job
Robbing is Thieves guild's job
Guarding is Order of shield's job

spitfir3tornado Guardian Embodiment of Liberty Posts: 102	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Dec 31, 2011 14:11:29 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by spitfir3tornado on Dec 31, 2011 14:11:29 GMT -5 Hired Blades?

nolanwashere Bandit Posts: 48	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Jan 1, 2012 0:06:32 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nolanwashere on Jan 1, 2012 0:06:32 GMT -5 I think this is a good Faction idea man unlike the Sheild guys these people protect the wealthy who can cover it
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crafter68
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The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Jan 1, 2012 1:20:10 GMT -5

Post by crafter68 on Jan 1, 2012 1:20:10 GMT -5

Constructive Criticism[/b]

Presentation

Before you submit any kind of formal application you need to present it well. This means; selective 'bolding', paragraphs and gaps throughout the post and correct spelling (I highly doubt this faction would go around clothing their victims...)
Essentially, do everything you can to make the application easier to read. This will make another person much more likely to accept it, giving that they see you have put time into the presentation.

Information

You need to include as much information about your faction as possible.
'Guild Purpose' should have (in my opinion) at least one paragraph - you also need to add more under the topics entitled 'How does you Guild plan to make a profit', and more importantly under, 'Guild Lore'.
If you have more body under every topic in the application, others will understand the proposed Guild, and if it is understood, acceptance is much more likely, by the assessor and the community alike. It is obvious to everyone whether you have tried, or not. As I said, if you have, others will believe that you will do likewise in game, and therefore this faction is a great idea. If you have obviously done this in a rush, then people will expect little from you - the application will be rejected.

If you read this, you will know what to do.
I suggest you do it.

Last Edit: Jan 1, 2012 1:36:24 GMT -5 by crafter68

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Colbinile Administrator Developer Posts: 95	The Black Serpents (A Mercenary Guild) Jan 2, 2012 18:29:11 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Colbinile on Jan 2, 2012 18:29:11 GMT -5 Denied.