Post by ChainedMemories on Dec 21, 2011 14:46:42 GMT -5
OOC
IGN: ChainedMemories
Age: 14
Role-Play Exp.: On minecraft: Kingdom of Aeonis
Why Us: MINECRAFT AND SKYRIM = EPIC.<--- most likely this and server sounds serious.
Time You Can Dedicate: I have to look how much fun I have.If I have a lot it will surely be 4 hours on weekends and 1 hours while schooldays.
IC
Name: Rayneven O'Doneil.
Race: Nord
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance: bright skin tone, long hair, blond hair, 1.85m, thin
Fears: The first dragon fight, his mother getting ill again
Personality: adventurous,communicative
Occupation: Apprentice(WhiteRun Guard)
Skills: Two-Handed Weapons
Nickname (Optional): Rayne(spoke like : Rain)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Whiterun Guard,Steven(Rayne's Mentor): "Heard that Rayne?There was a scream over there.We should take a look around."
Rayneven: "Again?Today there is a lot of trouble.Do I really have to do this again?"
Whiterun Guard: *slowly hinting at the girl next to him.It was a gorgeous lady."
*Rayne nods with a little grin*
Rayneven : Let's take a look what's going on over there.
Whiterun Guard : *giggling* Yes.Follow me Rayne!
*going down the street until they see 2 men fighting*
Rayneven : Stop it in order of justice in Whiterun!
*both men ignoring Rayne*
Rayneven : Stop it or I have to get rough!
Whiterun Guard, Steven : Rayne, you shouldn't be too ambitious. If you charge into those 2 guys it won't end good for you.
Rayneven : Umm..Yes sir, but should we just let them go on fighting?
Steven : No. You have to be a bit more assertive with your words. If you are so quiet like a moment ago they would never stop.
Rayneven : STOP IT GUYS AND COME OVER HERE.
*men stopping the fight and getting over to Rayne*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Rayneven O'Doneil lived an usual life in the center of White Run. His dad, Clarence O'Doneil, worked as a blacksmith. His mother,Cloe, stayed at home and took care of Rayne's 4 brothers and sisters. Rayne wasn't particularly. He was very playful and always popular.He soon knew all the guards by their first name after so many encounters. His dad was never contented with his greatest son. The biggest problem was his enthusiasm for fighting he thought. He wanted his son to be a blacksmith but Rayne never found enthusiasm for blacksmithing. His biggest wanting was that Rayne follows into his footsteps. But as he realized that Rayne wasn't able to do blacksmithing and never had the passion for it he stopped pushing him to do it. Rayne always adored the Guards and had fighting training.He was a decent fighter with the two-handed sword his father made for him and his mercenary skills were alright too. When he was 14 he helped taking care of his brothers and sisters very early because his mother's illness was very bad. His father had to work very long to get enough money and medicine for his mother. Rayne soon started little jobs for his neighbours and friends to get some coins too. After 3 years of fighting against her illness his mother recovered. Even in those years in which Rayne mostly had to take care of his family he never lost is passion for fighting. As his mother recovered he started his education to get a Whiterun Guard.
I got told, I should expand my backstory :
In his first year of education his he expanded his skills in fighting. His mentor Steven, was always very nice to him. He teached him the basics of being a Guard but not just this he also helped him when he had familliar problems or something like this. But sometimes Rayne's cockiness was an obstacle. He sometimes acted a bit illogical if other people were in a pretty pickle. But he was very clever and always wanted to learn more about the job of a Guard. Often he detected people while stealing something or kidnapping children. It always was a very nice feeling for him and confirmed that it was a good decision be a guard. he always like how people celebrated although he always said modest : " Not a big deal, Lady. It's my job!" As his mother was very important for him he always tried to make her proud. But when he got 18 his father died to old age. He was sad, but it was ok for him cause his father's lastword were : "Even if you're a silly Guard, Rayne, you're I like you more then every other guard, haha! " After two more years of education, he finally finished and became a real guard ( NOTE : I changed my IC age from 18->20 because i thought 1 year of education
a bit low and illogical). Now he (tries) to heep justice in Whiterun.
repost cause skipping mine...
IGN: ChainedMemories
Age: 14
Role-Play Exp.: On minecraft: Kingdom of Aeonis
Why Us: MINECRAFT AND SKYRIM = EPIC.<--- most likely this and server sounds serious.
Time You Can Dedicate: I have to look how much fun I have.If I have a lot it will surely be 4 hours on weekends and 1 hours while schooldays.
IC
Name: Rayneven O'Doneil.
Race: Nord
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance: bright skin tone, long hair, blond hair, 1.85m, thin
Fears: The first dragon fight, his mother getting ill again
Personality: adventurous,communicative
Occupation: Apprentice(WhiteRun Guard)
Skills: Two-Handed Weapons
Nickname (Optional): Rayne(spoke like : Rain)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Whiterun Guard,Steven(Rayne's Mentor): "Heard that Rayne?There was a scream over there.We should take a look around."
Rayneven: "Again?Today there is a lot of trouble.Do I really have to do this again?"
Whiterun Guard: *slowly hinting at the girl next to him.It was a gorgeous lady."
*Rayne nods with a little grin*
Rayneven : Let's take a look what's going on over there.
Whiterun Guard : *giggling* Yes.Follow me Rayne!
*going down the street until they see 2 men fighting*
Rayneven : Stop it in order of justice in Whiterun!
*both men ignoring Rayne*
Rayneven : Stop it or I have to get rough!
Whiterun Guard, Steven : Rayne, you shouldn't be too ambitious. If you charge into those 2 guys it won't end good for you.
Rayneven : Umm..Yes sir, but should we just let them go on fighting?
Steven : No. You have to be a bit more assertive with your words. If you are so quiet like a moment ago they would never stop.
Rayneven : STOP IT GUYS AND COME OVER HERE.
*men stopping the fight and getting over to Rayne*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Rayneven O'Doneil lived an usual life in the center of White Run. His dad, Clarence O'Doneil, worked as a blacksmith. His mother,Cloe, stayed at home and took care of Rayne's 4 brothers and sisters. Rayne wasn't particularly. He was very playful and always popular.He soon knew all the guards by their first name after so many encounters. His dad was never contented with his greatest son. The biggest problem was his enthusiasm for fighting he thought. He wanted his son to be a blacksmith but Rayne never found enthusiasm for blacksmithing. His biggest wanting was that Rayne follows into his footsteps. But as he realized that Rayne wasn't able to do blacksmithing and never had the passion for it he stopped pushing him to do it. Rayne always adored the Guards and had fighting training.He was a decent fighter with the two-handed sword his father made for him and his mercenary skills were alright too. When he was 14 he helped taking care of his brothers and sisters very early because his mother's illness was very bad. His father had to work very long to get enough money and medicine for his mother. Rayne soon started little jobs for his neighbours and friends to get some coins too. After 3 years of fighting against her illness his mother recovered. Even in those years in which Rayne mostly had to take care of his family he never lost is passion for fighting. As his mother recovered he started his education to get a Whiterun Guard.
I got told, I should expand my backstory :
In his first year of education his he expanded his skills in fighting. His mentor Steven, was always very nice to him. He teached him the basics of being a Guard but not just this he also helped him when he had familliar problems or something like this. But sometimes Rayne's cockiness was an obstacle. He sometimes acted a bit illogical if other people were in a pretty pickle. But he was very clever and always wanted to learn more about the job of a Guard. Often he detected people while stealing something or kidnapping children. It always was a very nice feeling for him and confirmed that it was a good decision be a guard. he always like how people celebrated although he always said modest : " Not a big deal, Lady. It's my job!" As his mother was very important for him he always tried to make her proud. But when he got 18 his father died to old age. He was sad, but it was ok for him cause his father's lastword were : "Even if you're a silly Guard, Rayne, you're I like you more then every other guard, haha! " After two more years of education, he finally finished and became a real guard ( NOTE : I changed my IC age from 18->20 because i thought 1 year of education
a bit low and illogical). Now he (tries) to heep justice in Whiterun.
repost cause skipping mine...